Thursday, July 5, 2018

✊taking out term 2 by cormac✊

breaking news room fifteen have survived term 2 they have been working so hard in passion projects art and writing  wait ill just check the time sorry but we just don,t have enough time to tell you how amazing room fifteen is i,ll just tell you the worst things about us ha,ha   well the movie making group have been doing an out standing job on a movie to fund raise money allot  of money and when i say allot i mean allot  i,m hundreds and its inside out wow that was awful wasn't it i,m sure some won as good as you wouldn't bother to do some thing as silly as that would you ever seen these guys those are the old ones we have got the new and improved ones  thanks for reading

2 comments:

  1. I think you should change the highlights because i can't read it

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  2. i think that you can change your writing highlight because I cant see the story that well because of that there are no full stops and ob your i'm you used a comma instead of an apostrophe i liked how you were spreading the word about the inside out movie

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